Thursday, August 19, 2010

Can you find anything wrong or ungrammatical in this brief letter?

Dear Sirs/Madams,





Firstly, I would like to apologize for the delay in completing and delivering the questionnaire to you before 14th November 2006 as requested. The questionnairre only come under my notice after I just returned from abroad on 13th November 2006.





I attach herewith the completed questionairre and if you have any questions or need clarifications, please feel free to contact me.

Can you find anything wrong or ungrammatical in this brief letter?
Correctly written:





I would like to apologize for the delay in completing and delivering the questionnaire to you before 14th November 2006 as requested. The questionnairre came under my notice just after I returned from abroad on 13th November 2006.





Attached please find the completed questionairre and if you have any questions or need clarifications, please feel free to contact me. ****Add contact information and sign your name****
Reply:Dear Sir or Madam,





I would like to apologize for the delay in completing and delivering the questionnaire to you before November 14, 2006, as requested. I just received it on November13, after returning from abroad.





I attach herewith the completed questionnaire and if you have any questions or need clarifications, please feel free to contact me.
Reply:Dear Sir/Madam,





First I would like to apologize for the delay in completing and delivering the questionaire to you before 14th November 2006 as requested. The questionaire only came to my notice after I returned from abroad on 13th November 2006.





I attach herewith the completed questionaire and if you have any questions or need any clarifications, please feel free to contact me.
Reply:Thanks for the points and I am not doing your homework or your job-hire someone to help before you fail or get fired





Have a great life
Reply:.....before November 14, 2006.....





....The questionnairre "came to my attention" just after returning from my trip abroad on November 13, 2006.





....completed questionairre, and if........
Reply:This is a nightmare...you have to bee kidding, right?


Firstly????? There is no secondly, so there is no "firstly." And that is not a word that would be used in a questionnaire. November 14, 2006, as requested.


The next sentence is a total mess....The questionnaire ""Only come under my notice???? you have to be kidding.


I attach HEREWITH ????





Here is how it probably should read.


I apologize for the late completion of the questionnaire. I was abroad and returned on November 13, 2006.


Enclosed is the completed form. Please contact me if you need clarification.
Reply:you spelled questionnaire incorrectly the second and third time.


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